Comment:
You demonstrate a good understanding of many of the ideas behind your point that speaking and text communication are creative language forms. You have a tone in your essay that explores the ideas thoughtfully and cleverly explains the more complicated aspects by putting them into practical contexts.
To develop your work further:
- There is a glaring omission in this essay – and that is the lack of specific examples. You must use quotations every time you describe a language device or effect. Every paragraph must contain at least one example.
- Once you’ve given examples, you’ll then be able to expand your answer by explaining the devices present in these quotes and naming the devices present and their effect.
React!